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    Chloé Leclair
    Chloé Leclair

    Character Gender : Female
    Posts : 23
    Join date : 2018-10-24

    Serena the cursed exceed

    Post by Chloé Leclair on Wed Nov 07, 2018 12:53 pm

    Name: Serena
    Rank: C Link
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Exceed
    Description:
    Personality:
    Serena is active, cheerful and friendly almost all the time! She's also cursed to periodically spread poison around her after pissing of a powerful mage one too many times. She will always think positive no matter how bleak the situation. Which is good, because most people don't like being poisoned and as a result don't like being near her.

    She gets lonely easily and doesn't like to be alone. But most normal people are afraid to be in her presence. It's not that she likes Chloé much, it's more that Chloé is the only human to accept her. In truth, Serena's curse is a blessing for Chloé even if she won't admit it. She won't betray her and she'll stay loyal because nobody else wants her close. So she'll help her even if she doesn't like everything Chloé does.
    Picture:

    Abilities:

    Aera:
    Name: Aera
    Rank: C
    Type: Supportive
    Description: The users grows wings and can fly for the duration of the spell. They can carry 1 full grown adult while flying. If there is no direct danger, they can fly for longer as they don't have to force magical energy to fly well.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5

    Grow:
    Name: Grow
    Rank: The exceed grows to the about the size of an adult human.
    Type: Supportive
    Description: The exceed grows to about the size of a human, allowing them to fight like a normal human would. this increases their physical strength with 60%
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5

    Cursed Body Yang:
    Name: Cursed Body: Yang
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Description: The user is cursed to poison everyone that touch them. She releases a small gas cloud about 1 meter around her which causes D-rank internal damage if one breathes it in every post until it has done C-rank damage total. This ability always activates in a post if it's not on cooldown. Everyone can only be hurt once per casting of the spell. The cloud is stationary once released and harms anything except the user. This spell cannot harm enchanted items without ooc permission.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5 post

    Cursed Body Yin:
    Name: Cursed Body: Yin
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Description: This ability releases an acid cloud that would harm anything it hits. It moves more slowly from the user and immediately deals C-rank damage to everything it touches. The cloud is stationary and harms anything except the user. This spell cannot harm enchanted items without ooc permission. This ability automatically activates 4 posts after Cursed body: Yang is activated and cannot otherwise be activated.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5 post
    Masha
    Masha

    Character Gender : Female
    Posts : 76
    Join date : 2018-10-28

    Re: Serena the cursed exceed

    Post by Masha on Sat Nov 10, 2018 7:29 pm

    Hi Chloe Leclair! ^^ My name is Masha and I'll be your grader. Any comments/edits I have will be in this color. Any concerns or questions you have about the grading, feel free to place in this thread or DM me on discord. Please note that all edits made outside this thread will be recorded. Onward!

    Spoiler:

    @Chloé Leclair wrote:Name: Serena
    Rank: C Just need proof of Purchase or Proof of Box in a spoiler at the bottom of the app ^^
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Exceed
    Description:
    Personality:
    Serena is active, cheerful and friendly almost all the time! She's also cursed to periodically spread poison around her after pissing of a powerful mage one too many times. She will always think positive no matter how bleak the situation. Which is good, because most people don't like being poisoned and as a result don't like being near her.

    She gets lonely easily and doesn't like to be alone. But most normal people are afraid to be in her presence. It's not that she likes Chloé much, it's more that Chloé is the only human to accept her. In truth, Serena's curse is a blessing for Chloé even if she won't admit it. She won't betray her and she'll stay loyal because nobody else wants her close. So she'll help her even if she doesn't like everything Chloé does.
    Picture:

    Abilities:

    Aera:
    Name: Aera
    Rank: C
    Type: Supportive
    Description: The users grows wings and can fly for the duration of the spell. They can carry 1 full grown adult while flying. If there is no direct danger, they can fly for longer as they don't have to force magical energy to fly well.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5

    Grow:
    Name: Grow
    Rank: The exceed grows to the about the size of an adult human.
    Type: Supportive
    Description: The exceed grows to about the size of a human, allowing them to fight like a normal human would. this increases their physical strength with 60%
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5

    Cursed Body Yang:
    Name: Cursed Body: Yang
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Description: The user is cursed to poison everyone that touch them. She releases a small gas cloud about 1 meter around her which causes D-rank internal damage if one breathes it in every post until it has done C-rank damage total. This ability always activates in a post if it's not on cooldown. Everyone can only be hurt once per casting of the spell. The cloud is stationary once released and harms anything except the user. This spell cannot harm enchanted items without ooc permission.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5 post

    Cursed Body Yin:
    Name: Cursed Body: Yin
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Description: This ability releases an acid cloud that would harm anything it hits. It moves more slowly from the user and immediately deals C-rank damage to everything it touches. The cloud is stationary and harms anything except the user. This spell cannot harm enchanted items without ooc permission. This ability automatically activates 4 posts after Cursed body: Yang is activated and cannot otherwise be activated.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5 post

    When the edits are done, please bump the thread or DM me~



    Chloé Leclair
    Chloé Leclair

    Character Gender : Female
    Posts : 23
    Join date : 2018-10-24

    Re: Serena the cursed exceed

    Post by Chloé Leclair on Sun Nov 11, 2018 8:01 am

    Since the thread is archived, I can't see it. Added an image of another staff gave me as proof.
    Masha
    Masha

    Character Gender : Female
    Posts : 76
    Join date : 2018-10-28

    Re: Serena the cursed exceed

    Post by Masha on Sun Nov 11, 2018 10:36 am

    Spoiler:

    @Chloé Leclair wrote:Name: Serena
    Rank: C Link
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Exceed
    Description:
    Personality:
    Serena is active, cheerful and friendly almost all the time! She's also cursed to periodically spread poison around her after pissing of a powerful mage one too many times. She will always think positive no matter how bleak the situation. Which is good, because most people don't like being poisoned and as a result don't like being near her.

    She gets lonely easily and doesn't like to be alone. But most normal people are afraid to be in her presence. It's not that she likes Chloé much, it's more that Chloé is the only human to accept her. In truth, Serena's curse is a blessing for Chloé even if she won't admit it. She won't betray her and she'll stay loyal because nobody else wants her close. So she'll help her even if she doesn't like everything Chloé does.
    Picture:

    Abilities:

    Aera:
    Name: Aera
    Rank: C
    Type: Supportive
    Description: The users grows wings and can fly for the duration of the spell. They can carry 1 full grown adult while flying. If there is no direct danger, they can fly for longer as they don't have to force magical energy to fly well.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5

    Grow:
    Name: Grow
    Rank: The exceed grows to the about the size of an adult human.
    Type: Supportive
    Description: The exceed grows to about the size of a human, allowing them to fight like a normal human would. this increases their physical strength with 60%
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5

    Cursed Body Yang:
    Name: Cursed Body: Yang
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Description: The user is cursed to poison everyone that touch them. She releases a small gas cloud about 1 meter around her which causes D-rank internal damage if one breathes it in every post until it has done C-rank damage total. This ability always activates in a post if it's not on cooldown. Everyone can only be hurt once per casting of the spell. The cloud is stationary once released and harms anything except the user. This spell cannot harm enchanted items without ooc permission.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5 post

    Cursed Body Yin:
    Name: Cursed Body: Yin
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Description: This ability releases an acid cloud that would harm anything it hits. It moves more slowly from the user and immediately deals C-rank damage to everything it touches. The cloud is stationary and harms anything except the user. This spell cannot harm enchanted items without ooc permission. This ability automatically activates 4 posts after Cursed body: Yang is activated and cannot otherwise be activated.
    CD | Duration: 7 | 5 post




    Rin Moriyama
    Rin Moriyama

    Character Gender : Female
    Posts : 57
    Join date : 2018-08-13

    Re: Serena the cursed exceed

    Post by Rin Moriyama on Mon Nov 12, 2018 5:54 pm

    Due to a trial mod error, your exceed is unapproved. You will need to remove your exceed's rank and their third and fourth abilities. Exceeds are different than combat and support pets and therefore do not get abilities aside from aera and body growth. Once these edits have been made. Please bump this thread. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to DM me on discord.


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