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    Fulgur Virga

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    Post by Jui$y Crow on Wed Nov 07, 2018 8:17 pm



    Name:Fulgur Virga
    Rank:Artifact(+)
    Type:Magical Staff
    Description: Fulgur Virga takes on traits similar to that of the Greek God Hermes' Caduceus. It is entwined by seven serpents and in each of the squirming serpents’ mouths hold a jewel of a different color. Its grip has a transparent quality like crystal and emits a bluish white light. When touched, it spews a dark static lightning from the staff {Flavor of text}. The Caduceus is about 2 meters , and half.
    Abilities:

    B - Rank Spells:

    Name: For the Holder of My Body
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive Spell
    Description: Similar to other types of Elemental Magic, Lightning Magic allows the user to transform their body into the element they control: by transforming into a lightning bolt, the user is able move at a speedy pace, and have the added advantage of traveling in short burst around at very high speeds, and damaging everyone or everything they come in contact with, much like real lightning. For as long as the user is within contact with the artifact this ability can be use. They can use this type of teleportation for up to 1 time per post.
    Cool Down & Duration:7||9
    Range:60 meters


    Name: Smite
    Rank: B - Rank
    Type: (Offensive
    Description: Mostly used to destroy targets from long range, Mors focuses a large cluster of electricity above his target or targets, then release it to send a huge and powerful lightning bolt crashing down from the sky, frying the unlucky target or targets in the area. He can either do that or use this attack to launch a massive lightning stream from his staff.

    Cool Down & Duration:7||9
    Range: 125 meters

    A - Rank Spells:


    Name: Deathpiea Lightning Storm
    Rank: A - Rank
    Type: Offensive/AOE
    Description: The user shot a brief bolt of lightning into the sky. Within a few seconds dark clouds begin to from. Sounds of thunder can be heard, and it is within the user power to send down up to 5 bolts of lightning down on his foes. Each bolt is on the level of A Rank Spell, and the bolt of lightning if hit can stun the foe for up to 3 post. These clouds cover up to 360 meters in all direction, and can be remove by higher tier magic spell.
    Cooldown & Duration:9||11
    Diameter: 360 meters

    Name: Lighting Prison
    Rank: A - Rank
    Type: Defensive
    Description: A Magic spell in which the user creates multiple Lightning Orbs filled with enormous amounts of Lightning Magic and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. When the orbs are released, everything below the circle is struck by powerful lightning bolts. If all the Orbs are released at once, this spell is said to be powerful enough to destroy the entire town. If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, the lightning orbs explode,and struck anyone withing 45 meters range of it. If hit you will be stun for 3 posts.
    Cooldown & Duration:9||11
    Diameter: 360 meters
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    Post by Masha on Sat Nov 10, 2018 7:13 pm

    Hi Jui$y Crow! ^^ My name is Masha and I'll be your grader. Any comments/edits I have will be in this color. Any concerns or questions you have about the grading, feel free to place in this thread or DM me on discord. Please note that all edits made outside this thread will be recorded. Off we go!

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    Name:Fulgur Virga
    Rank:Artifact(+) Please put proof of purchase or proof of Box rolls in a spoiler at the bottom of the app
    Type:Magical Staff
    Description: Fulgur Virga takes on traits similar to that of the Greek God Hermes' Caduceus. It is entwined by seven serpents and in each of the squirming serpents’ mouths hold a jewel of a different color. Its grip has a transparent quality like crystal and emits a bluish white light. When touched, it spews a dark static lightning for the staff. The Caduceus is about 2 meters , and half. Please specify the dark static lightning is a plot thing only and does not do damage.
    Abilities:

    B - Rank Spells:

    Name: For the Holder of My Body
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive Spell
    Description: Similar to other types of Elemental Magic, Lightning Magic allows the user to transform their body into the element they control: by transforming into a lightning bolt, the user is able to avoid physical attacks, and have the added advantage of traveling in short burst around at very high speeds, and damaging everyone or everything they come in contact with, much like real lightning. For as long as the user is within contact with the artifact this ability can be use. Coming into contact with any body part that is cover in lightning the result is being stun for 2 post. This techniques give the user 50% boost in speed. Please remove the avoidance of physical attacks, the boost to speed and limit the teleportation range to 60 meters. Also put that the teleportation can only be used once per post.
    Cool Down & Duration:7/9
    Range:180 meters


    Name: Smite
    Rank: B - Rank
    Type: (Offensive
    Description: Mostly used to destroy targets from long range, Mors focuses a large cluster of electricity above his target or targets, then release it to send a huge and powerful lightning bolt crashing down from the sky, frying the unlucky target or targets in the area. He can either do that or use this attack to launch a massive lightning stream from his staff.

    Cool Down & Duration: 6/8
    Range: 125 meters

    A - Rank Spells:


    Name: Deathpiea Lightning Storm
    Rank: A - Rank
    Type: Offensive
    Description: The user shot a brief bolt of lightning into the sky. Within a few seconds dark clouds begin to from. Sounds of thunder can be heard, and it is within the user power to send down up to 5 bolts of lightning down on his foes. Each bolt is on the level of A Rank Spell, and the bolt of lightning if hit can stun the foe for up to 3 post. These clouds cover up to 360 meters in all direction, and can be remove by higher tier magic spell.
    Cooldown & Duration: 7/9
    Range: 360 meters Since it is basically AOE, put Diameter instead of Range please

    When the edits are done, please bump the thread or DM me~



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    Post by Jui$y Crow on Mon Nov 12, 2018 9:45 am

    @Masha

    All done, and added my last spell



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    Post by Masha on Mon Nov 12, 2018 3:48 pm

    Just put the Cooldowns for your B rank spells at 9 posts and the Cooldowns of your A rank spells at 11 posts. Then I can approve it ^^



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    Post by Jui$y Crow on Mon Nov 12, 2018 7:08 pm

    All done
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    Post by Masha on Mon Nov 12, 2018 7:30 pm

    Okay. To make this a little less confusing, please separate the Cooldown and Duration into two different lines. Then please make sure your B rank spells have a Duration of 7 or less posts and a Cooldown of 9 or more posts. Make sure that your A rank spells have a Duration of 9 or less and a Cooldown of 11 or more. As of right now, all of your spells have either too high of a duration or too low of a Cooldown.



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    Post by Jui$y Crow on Tue Nov 13, 2018 4:07 am

    Done
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    Post by Masha on Tue Nov 13, 2018 8:15 pm

    Spoiler:

    @Jui$y Crow wrote:


    Name:Fulgur Virga
    Rank:Artifact(+)
    Type:Magical Staff
    Description: Fulgur Virga takes on traits similar to that of the Greek God Hermes' Caduceus. It is entwined by seven serpents and in each of the squirming serpents’ mouths hold a jewel of a different color. Its grip has a transparent quality like crystal and emits a bluish white light. When touched, it spews a dark static lightning from the staff {Flavor of text}. The Caduceus is about 2 meters , and half.
    Abilities:

    B - Rank Spells:

    Name: For the Holder of My Body
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive Spell
    Description: Similar to other types of Elemental Magic, Lightning Magic allows the user to transform their body into the element they control: by transforming into a lightning bolt, the user is able move at a speedy pace, and have the added advantage of traveling in short burst around at very high speeds, and damaging everyone or everything they come in contact with, much like real lightning. For as long as the user is within contact with the artifact this ability can be use. They can use this type of teleportation for up to 1 time per post.
    Cool Down & Duration:7||9
    Range:60 meters


    Name: Smite
    Rank: B - Rank
    Type: (Offensive
    Description: Mostly used to destroy targets from long range, Mors focuses a large cluster of electricity above his target or targets, then release it to send a huge and powerful lightning bolt crashing down from the sky, frying the unlucky target or targets in the area. He can either do that or use this attack to launch a massive lightning stream from his staff.

    Cool Down & Duration:7||9
    Range: 125 meters

    A - Rank Spells:


    Name: Deathpiea Lightning Storm
    Rank: A - Rank
    Type: Offensive/AOE
    Description: The user shot a brief bolt of lightning into the sky. Within a few seconds dark clouds begin to from. Sounds of thunder can be heard, and it is within the user power to send down up to 5 bolts of lightning down on his foes. Each bolt is on the level of A Rank Spell, and the bolt of lightning if hit can stun the foe for up to 3 post. These clouds cover up to 360 meters in all direction, and can be remove by higher tier magic spell.
    Cooldown & Duration:9||11
    Diameter: 360 meters

    Name: Lighting Prison
    Rank: A - Rank
    Type: Defensive
    Description: A Magic spell in which the user creates multiple Lightning Orbs filled with enormous amounts of Lightning Magic and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. When the orbs are released, everything below the circle is struck by powerful lightning bolts. If all the Orbs are released at once, this spell is said to be powerful enough to destroy the entire town. If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, the lightning orbs explode,and struck anyone withing 45 meters range of it. If hit you will be stun for 3 posts.
    Cooldown & Duration:9||11
    Diameter: 360 meters





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